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Post by transparentman Mon Jan 25, 2010 1:04 am

Ernest Hemingway once wrote a story in six words and supposedly called it his best work...."For sale: baby shoes, never worn."


I dare you to best him.


I'll start.....



"Takes a thousand lies, supporting truth."
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Post by transparentman Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:01 am

I'm disappointed no one has stepped up to my challenge....so I'll go again....


"See, he stumbled over her heart."
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Post by meether369 Wed Jan 27, 2010 4:28 pm

That is a really, really difficult thing that Hemingway can do quite well. No offense, but I don't get a single picture in my brain from your "stories." Hemingway's puts volumes of images in my head. All are heartbreaking, too.
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Post by Angie Wed Jan 27, 2010 5:03 pm

yeah, you could take his and make copies, for example "For sale: wedding dress, never worn." but it would be just that, an imitation....I don't think I could easily do this one on my own.

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Post by transparentman Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:21 pm

That's cool. I don't really care if you take anything away from my attempts. The point is to attempt it. It could open some proverbial creative floodgate. I was inspired after reading Papa's 6 word story. It is heartbreaking. I just think the world would be a better place if we all tried to outdo the greats...even if we fail miserably.
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Post by Angie Wed Jan 27, 2010 7:25 pm

I agree with you, Josh. I don't think we should give up....I think that trying to stretch your bounds is always the best idea, even if we do fail. Absolutely.

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Post by transparentman Fri Jan 29, 2010 11:28 pm

"There's no one left to fight."
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Post by Bethany Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:41 am

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Post by dave Mon Feb 01, 2010 9:39 am

Another day, another dollar. (Same cubicle.)
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Post by Pete Mon Feb 01, 2010 10:37 am

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Post by transparentman Mon Feb 01, 2010 10:38 am

"Be careful with that. It's awesome."
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Post by transparentman Thu May 06, 2010 9:39 pm

"She never saw his bad side."
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Post by TheGreat&TerribleBob Fri May 07, 2010 2:26 pm

Ernest Hemingway once wrote a story in six words and supposedly called it his best work...."For sale: baby shoes, never worn."


I dare you to best him.

Position shotgun. Pull trigger. Brain salad.
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Post by transparentman Fri May 07, 2010 7:29 pm

TheGreat&TerribleBob wrote:
Ernest Hemingway once wrote a story in six words and supposedly called it his best work...."For sale: baby shoes, never worn."


I dare you to best him.

Position shotgun. Pull trigger. Brain salad.


In context, that makes perfect sense.
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Post by TheGreat&TerribleBob Sat May 08, 2010 9:25 am

It sure does.
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Post by transparentman Sat May 08, 2010 2:31 pm

"Jesus: 'Don't be dicks.' The end."
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